The winds out of the west land blow

	XXXVIII		Q

V	The winds out of the west land blow		Q
V	My friends have breathed them there;
V	Warm with the blood of lads I know
V	Comes east the sighing air.		Q

V	It fanned their temples, filled their lungs,	5	Q
V	Scattered their forelocks free;
V	My friends made words of it with tongues
V	That talk no more to me.

V	Their voices, dying as they fly,
V	Thick on the wind are sown;	10
V	The names of men blow soundless by,
V	My fellows’ and my own.

V	Oh lads, at home I heard you plain,
	But here your speech is still,
	And down the sighing wind in vain	15
	You hollo from the hill.

	The wind and I, we both were there,
V	But neither long abode;
	Now through the friendless world we fare
V	And sigh upon the road.	20

Key: V: Textual Variation. C: Commentary. Q: Question. Glossary

ASL XXXVIII “The winds out of the west land blow”

Top ▲ Glossary

Line	Word	Glossary
3	forelock	A lock of hair that grows or falls over the forehead (To “tug the forelock” is to acknowledge a superior)
16	hollo	Call out
18	abode	A short sword worn on a belt

Top ▲ Commentary

Line	Commentary
	Date: Oct – Dec 1895
meter	Four line stanzas of alternating eight and six syllables, (iambic quatrameter / trimeter) rhymed alternately

Top ▲ Variations

Line	Text	Textual variation
1	D1d1	winds] wind<s> blow] blow<s>
2	D1d1	them] it
3	D1d1	And [?sent] → And at my ear the speech it knows
4	D1d1	Fly silent \ [?sighing] [?swelling] / on the air → I [?] on the air
5	D1	fanned] <stroked> temples] <faces>
6	D1	And from their <lips> \ mouths / flew free, \ Scattered their forelocks free, /
7	D1	My friends] And they
8	D1	talk] say
9	D2	dying as they fly,] <perished to a sigh>
10	D2	Loose on] <Along> \ Thick on / Thick on is used in all editions before Nov 1922
10	D2	wind] \ gale gusts /
11	D2	blow soundless] go <silent> \ soundless /
12+	D2	Additional two lines: So far the east is from the west \| The wind has lost the word
13	D2	Oh] My
18	D2	abode] could stay
20	D1	sigh] <meet>
20	D2	road] way

Top ▲ Questions

Line	Question
1	Why does the poet change from “wind” to “winds” from the draft to the final version?
4	Why is the air described as “sighing“?
5	What is the difference in mood between stroked their faces in the draft and fanned their temples in the final version?
Whole poem	What evidence can you find from the poem as a whole that the poet links the winds with words and poetry itself?
Whole poem	How does this poem fit with the others that consider the physical and emotion distance away from ‘Shropshire’ for the narrator in this phase of the collection?